J. Haux

I'm tired.

Yeah. Sure . ( :^o ) :wink: I'm glad, Bubble. Oh! So you CAN brutally edit your story, if you've written it. :wink: I enjoyed it. ~Jacquie~

Recomendo que Daphne va por un lago y encontra un cisne. Esto es mi opinión. ¡Ah ah! ¡Usted es chistoso, Griffinkeeper!

Where is it from?

Hi! I'm Jacquie! Welcome to YWS! I'm new too.

Hi Alyssa! I'm Jacquie-I like to sing, read, and swim too! I used to play softball...until I got hit in the head and was in ER...I play video games, but ...

Also (sorry for getting off subject) Maybe he/she isn't really twenty-some years old. (But at any rate, it was probably written by a twelve-year-old.) Every time I update my profile, ...

I thought it was amusing: I liked the characters. It was creative, written by a twelve-year-old with a good imagination, but without a lot of experience. There could have been ...

Henry was never really a nice man, though he tried to be. He was very ambitious, and with his ambition, he had the potential to be very dangerous. His mind ...

Oh, I think it's the right forum. Fantasy/Science fiction, either or.

I like it, Lilac! But I don't have very many critiques, so I'll resort to structural and grammatical suggestions! :D And, why hadn’t they fought to keep me? Why hadn’t ...

*cough* and I get a 0/10 for not having mine...

Oh, 7-8/10

The hum of the computer and my sister trying to sing out of her voice register in the living room. Oh...now she's playing "The Glowworm" on the piano. That's what ...

Haven't read a whole lot-I'll come back later. A little too wordy sometimes. One of my own greatest faults...Well, I'll elaborate later. Can't reply now!